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Interesting lore.... probably not sensible lore but we'll work with it. I still don't see how the Tohoku Earthquake gets worse in this timeline though. 

Edit: What? Blanchard's typology is problematic while more or less you just recreated his definition............ Honestly sounds like a weird sidestepping considering I doubt Zach's identification affects his liking of his female body.


Overall though, the theming is quite profound, and I love the explanations overall given there so don't get me wrong. Everything is wonderful from a writing perspective. It's top-notch and a masterpiece

Update: So far I've decided to go for Mother's help because it's the most sensible one to me. I mean, she's 180 iq, you cannot make a mistake with looking for her help. (Also there's an inkling suspicion that some of the other paths will make me like Mom but I'm clueless).

Otherwise I will note how it's sort of silly to demonstrate smartness with what for some people are middle-school lessons in maths. No, seriously. Look up Additional Maths. Even without that you generally are armed with that stuff with A-levels. Might be some sort of illusionbreaker.

He honestly sounds to me more like a motivation-dependent 125 iq than someone anywhere near his mother. 

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I'll post more because overall, I really like the product Best writing I've ever seen from what is essentially a porn fetish game. I'm guessing it's partially a self-insert. Would you mind confirming? I'm ultimately really curious about it.

Actually no, lol. Zach ended up getting a fair number of pieces of me because I write what I know (e.g., being miserable and trying to find solace in intelligence, acting like you're only lonely because you're better than anyone else, severe OCD but not realizing it because your understanding of it is so limited), but I truly don't think of myself as being this man (nor would I want to). For an actual self-insert, look at a ton of Scribble Hub stories and the sprite viewer within re:Dreamer. There's a canon answer to which character I am within the story, and it's the character with sprites tied to the developer commentary system (which you can unlock with the patron password, which is in the changelog of this version).

Oh my lord, nevermind, there seems to be some dominant heredity of intelligence going on in the family, I'm guessing.

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